About a month ago I posted a question about my site .

At that time, I was told that the content was poorly presented, and I didn’t talk about myself well, told badly about my work, etc. My site is www.sergeivisotsky.com .

Almost a month passed and I redid my site completely. And, dear HashCode users, what suggestions do you have and constructive criticism, what could be wrong now, maybe some bugs, etc. Please relate with understanding, because your opinion is very important to me.

Thank you very much for the shortcomings and constructive criticism found, some of your proposals have already been implemented, and it turned out much better, but you need to think about some. Thank you all very much!

Closed due to the fact that off-topic participants Duck Learns to Hide , Grundy , AK ♦ , aleksandr barakin , Vadim Ovchinnikov Jan 7 '17 at 6:40 .

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    I think it is not necessary to make a hat so big, more than half the height of the screen. Still, she is not the main content of the site. In addition, the navigation bar about, work, contact so strongly merges with the social buttons that it does not immediately reach that they serve to navigate the site. It is necessary to add the signature I in social network to the social buttons. Otherwise it seems that the social buttons are all sorts of plus signs that are found on almost all modern sites. - ReinRaus
  • And how is everything else? - sergeivisotsky
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    My advice to you is not to show off with English - it feels like you know it at the level of "london is the capital of great britain". If you don’t speak Shakespeare without a language, use the services of a person who knows him at a fairly good level. - DreamChild
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    With decorative shadows constantly the same problem. It should be like this: he showed the person an option without shadows, then he added them and showed him again. And if after asking him if it’s better, he will say: “It has become, but I don’t understand what you have changed,” then all is well. Hence the conclusion: the shadows should be invisible. Or hard one pixel, or large, but the color rgba(r, g, b, 0.15) . It's like a bass: you don't listen to him, but if the bass player is disconnected, you will understand it right away. - Bars
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    The old obviously offtopic question - Duck Learns to Take Cover

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All that is lower is my humble thoughts. I apologize in advance if I touch.

  1. In my opinion it is better not to use two sets of icons on the site, it is better to choose one and where to use it.
  2. About box-shadow already noticed. Try reducing it or reducing blur.
  3. In the works it is better to specify the working links instead of / in addition to the screenshots of the websites, if there is no such possibility, then, for example, put a dry layout on the test page. If you don’t want it, then at least there are more screenshots, not two identical ones. By the way, do not limit the screenshots, it does not look aesthetically pleasing.
  4. Personally, I am very annoyed by the incomprehensible effect with headers, when, when loading a page, they move.
  5. In the section about something missing, maybe your photos?

UPDATE: I saw that in some works there is more than one screenshot, which pleases, but still most of the works one by one. In addition, the job description in some places is identical, but I would like to somehow “dilute” it, for example, with some technical details (what were the difficulties / what technologies / what was chosen to implement this or that detail and why / other features of the work) .

  • And how do you get the idea for the works that I liked the most about making the design, like on that website, for example, like here - www.sergeivisotsky.com/work/macart? - sergeivisotsky
  • The idea may be excellent, but the example, again in my opinion, is not very successful. Such a font is not for the web. - Gena Tsarinny

  1. In my opinion, the headings are better done with the engraving effect (look for text-shadow application options)

  2. Red text is hard to read. Try blue or dark gray with text-shadow effects. It would be great to choose the color in which the favicon made.

  3. The menu on top is almost invisible. Try bigger and fatter.

  4. On the page works box-shadow merges. Either reduce the radius of the shadow, or increase the distance between the blocks.

  5. Align the works to the center vertically

  6. Button Top is "not level" in the center. Use the align attribute for parent containers instead of the margin 'a logo and the Up button

  7. Of course, I don’t perfectly know English, but in some places there are mistakes. Order Now , for example, translates as "Order Now." Replace with " Email me " =)

  8. Contact page duplicated in the header